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    Hi, I'm new to composing and flash. Send me a pm if you want to work on something together:)

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    Looking for Feedback for my poem;

    Posted by TheWinkMan - August 17th, 2010


    Hi, I'm looking for feedback on my latest poem entitled, "A Heart-Filled Goodbye" any and all feedback would be appreciated:)

    A HEART FILLED GOODBYE
    ---Joey Winkler---
    Remember me not for when things turned bad,
    But instead for the fun that we once had,
    I'm neither sad nor glad for what has passed,
    But I will always remember the best of our past.

    This is a heart-filled goodbye for all the things that have died.
    But I will move on, and continue my life as I smile wide,
    Why'll I take larger then life strides,

    Never giving in to a loss of hope,
    And always saying nope to dope,
    Its for me to leave, and be free,
    For now I am happy as can be,
    Cause I am free from you as
    You are free from me,

    Free to do what I please,
    Without having to be judged by
    The one who thinks they are grander than the sky,

    Who believed one could never die,
    Who cried when a friendship died,

    Once I said my final heart-filled goodbye.


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