Hey NG! If anyone has a moment, please check out my first audio submission and offer me up any and all constructive criticisms you guys have! It's in 7/4, so it's pretty cool. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/566035

Hi, I'm looking for feedback on my latest poem entitled, "A Heart-Filled Goodbye" any and all feedback would be appreciated:)

A HEART FILLED GOODBYE
---Joey Winkler---
Remember me not for when things turned bad,
But instead for the fun that we once had,
I'm neither sad nor glad for what has passed,
But I will always remember the best of our past.

This is a heart-filled goodbye for all the things that have died.
But I will move on, and continue my life as I smile wide,
Why'll I take larger then life strides,

Never giving in to a loss of hope,
And always saying nope to dope,
Its for me to leave, and be free,
For now I am happy as can be,
Cause I am free from you as
You are free from me,

Free to do what I please,
Without having to be judged by
The one who thinks they are grander than the sky,

Who believed one could never die,
Who cried when a friendship died,

Once I said my final heart-filled goodbye.